Diary of Alison Rose : complex girl

INTENNSEEE!!! well-crafted fantasy with rich worldbuilding and high stakes. The lore is deep, the action scenes are gripping, and the protagonist’s journey is emotionally compelling. However, the pacing drags at the start, and some side characters could be more developed. Once it picks up, though, it really delivers. If you love high-stakes fantasy with vivid battles and deep mysteries, this is worth the read.

I re-read this and saw how bad I wrote this that's why I'll rewrite everything .

Then Mike went around the port gathering information. He found out that there was a shipyard some distance away from the port where the marines repaired their ships. It was his best bet so he went there after eating some food from a stall.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Hippolyta was Alarmed a mortal man wishing to challenge the god of war into battle is just plain suicide! she must go now before something happens to the goddess mate, she then said in a hurried tone [We must find your mate now!! Ares is not to be trifled with! a man challenging a god is suicide come on we must save him!].

"MALFOY? Bloody Malfoy wants to marry me?" he needed air, he needed to breath and think and get the fuck out of here.

He froze immediately he saw the guy.

"My guess is, they'll do it without exposing their identity. What I suggest, is for us to wait patiently for some anomaly to happen, and we'll be ready for response at moments notice. When we're out, I'll help you identify the two people." Walter finished his explanation and put down his tied up hands.